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as a song it is slightly odd that every line rhymes; it works much better as a poem in my opinion but then i don't know the accompanying tune. It's ...

Overall i thought it was very enjoyable but a little confusing, i didn't really understand exactly what was going on. Was she actually drowning? or drowning in a sea of ...

Personally i think you gave away too much if this is the first chapter of a novel/novella, also i think you have described too much. Like the review above said ...

I liked it but i thought it was a bit light, it's not a very good way of explaining the feeling i have about it but it's the best i ...

I liked it, not much to rip to shreds, but in my opinion Roy believes Justine's lost her memory a little too quickly, especially since she first says swear to ...

She'd always return to the same spot in the sweet, green grass that she had eventually started to create the slightest dirt path I don't feel this sentence really makes ...

I can see why this has been compared to twilight, it has a very familiar feel to it when i read it. Overall i think it is well written but ...