rohan

I did not mean to be rude. These were the point of improvement that I think must be tackled especially when the poem is on OCD. YWS is indeed a ...

I could not read the whole thing because of numerous grammatical errors, especially using your instead of you're and using capital letters where they should be small and vice versa. ...

I used tiger because the joyful eight-year-old kid has got to be silly. Thanks for the review!

Hi! Thanks for the suggestion. I completely agree to it I took a note of it when you said it on one of my previous poems. It is of utmost ...

Constructive criticism is hard to get. My friends agreed that cried and rejoiced don't rhyme so democratically you win :D Do review more of my works.

Lets not debate about it :) Glad you like it.

Thanks. Yes, the comma needs to be added. And I'm not good enough to make someone jealous.

Thanks. I am here only to be brutally critiqued :) While writing, I knew kid and fiend didn't rhyme but I took creative liberty as it made sense for the ...