rodent

I loved this, screw the fact it had no description other than lil- or how it jumped from scene to scene , It was fun to read and thats what ...

i liked the fat bodies part-though it would of been better if you said they glistend with sweat , or blood-or somthing thats excreeted from pores in skin- any way ...

your style is exactly like mine which is acctually a bit creepy , anyway griffen keeper is rite-we dont care about the history or the exact hight of a charecter ...