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Re: earthquake
Heyy, i really like this piece, i love the way you build a picture of the situation on our heads, the description is fantastic. the way in wich the main ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Forgotten Hope
Heyy, i really love this poem, partly because to me it dosen't make sense. i love the way that i have to read it a few times to understand all ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Harp *Edit*
Heyy, As a harp player i find this poem really touching, it is obviously written by someone who has experienced this situation. The way the atmosphere is created is very ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Child of the Storm (Chapter One)
heyy this is an excellent piece of writing, the way that in the first chapter you make the wind and rain seem as if they belong, and the way that ...
Jan 31, 2011