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This is really well written, the descriptions you use stand out well. She loved to taunt him with her charm, to dress so wonderfully in the most becoming gowns, to ...

This definitely has a lot of cliche-ness to it but I don't know, I actually do like some parts of it. It really has potential. One line I really like ...

I like the fact that you wrote this in three minutes and just let it all spill out because sometimes that is just what you need to write a good ...

This is great in the way that this story can really hit home for a lot of people, I'm sure. It describes feelings we've all felt at some point or ...