rissymay

thanks for the review!

Thanks! I was a little unsure about the word choice when I published it- I think I used some words too many times and could've thought of better ones. I'm ...

thanks! i wasn't so sure how it turned it, so thanks for the reassurance XD thanks for the review! -rissymay

cool! I totally agree with the thing about the first lines... good point. Your comments have made me think of stuff to add... maybe even GOOD stuff. :) thanks for ...

thanks! i don't write music, but I definitely could... I play five-ish instruments, so I very well could make a song... XD thanks for the review! -rissymay

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it :D

I really like this... the last stanza is so powerful :D The only complaint I have is the word "dank"- it seems kind of... abrupt, sudden... blunt for this poem, ...

ok. cool.

gotcha XD I'm starting to get a pile of things I want to rewrite, but I just don't get around to it...

yeah... I just wrote a chapter of one story from a different character's POV, and I was thinking I would switch the POVs of the characters with every chapter, but ...

cool! could you remind me when it's up so I can read it? :D

haha, it's fine. Without writing that sucks, we'd never have any writing that was really good, I guess. i'll try to read that chapter soon. I'm a little reviewed-out right ...

cool! thanks for the review :)

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rissymay reporting for a review! I love the idea of the POV being from a leaf. One thought right from the start: what if there were some humans who would ...

I really like this, and I'm interested in this setting you've created. You should write more! Please! :D Nothing bad to say about this. -rissymay