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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Picture the Civil War

    i couldn't really understand who was talking...but halfway through i figured it out that the crutch was talking! It took me a while! anyways, i'm not really one to crit ...

    Sep 3, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Just a love song

    I loved it!! your talented at writing things like this! I LOVED it! you should keep writing this kind of stuff! But one thing: About who I am, Who I ...

    Feb 25, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: i love you.

    omg! that hit hard! i know what the boy is going through! my best frieend was beaten by her dad! so i can kinda touch base with the meaning of ...

    Nov 9, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Murdered and The Murderer

    i love this stanza A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, To steal a girl’s life Just to prove he can. It cut soo deep! it was really well ...

    Sep 29, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Cycle

    This was very good! Very well put together! I loved it because it was a very deep poem! i enjoyed it alot! i love the last stanza! it's very... um... ...

    Sep 28, 2007


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