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Re: Picture the Civil War
i couldn't really understand who was talking...but halfway through i figured it out that the crutch was talking! It took me a while! anyways, i'm not really one to crit ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Just a love song
I loved it!! your talented at writing things like this! I LOVED it! you should keep writing this kind of stuff! But one thing: About who I am, Who I ...
Feb 25, 2008 -
Re: i love you.
omg! that hit hard! i know what the boy is going through! my best frieend was beaten by her dad! so i can kinda touch base with the meaning of ...
Nov 9, 2007 -
Re: The Murdered and The Murderer
i love this stanza A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, To steal a girl’s life Just to prove he can. It cut soo deep! it was really well ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Cycle
This was very good! Very well put together! I loved it because it was a very deep poem! i enjoyed it alot! i love the last stanza! it's very... um... ...
Sep 28, 2007
