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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Well, she is telling this to the evil queen, she saw a figure dart and had an idea that her stepmother sent someone to kill her, so she said that ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    About the %u2018her%u2019 in the poem, well, it refers to the %u2018evil queen%u2019 in the story

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    I will finalise it and send it again

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Thank you for the valuable suggestion, I will make sure to implement it in my future poems

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Umm, I tried it but it’s still showing ‘misun’

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: क्या गलत है?

    Hi! I know how to read Hindi and I absolutely loved this poem, it’s amazing and I really like the way you wrote it, and it’s far much better in ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose

    I never like to report grammar mistakes, but I sometimes ask doubts relating to the story..... but I have no doubt in this and I just want to say that ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose

    I never like to report grammar mistakes, but I sometimes ask doubts relating to the story..... but I have no doubt in this and I just want to say that ...

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Sorry, but the last line in the poem is ‘misunderstood’ I wrote it but I don’t know why it didn’t show......

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    Sorry, but the last line in the poem is ‘misunderstood’ I wrote it but I don’t know why it didn’t show......

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Poisoned Apple Part 2

    Hi! I don’t want to tell any grammar mistakes, but I just wanted to say that this story was awesome and it’s among my favourite short stories Keep writing 🙂

    Sep 11, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Poisoned Apple Part 2

    Hi! I don’t want to tell any grammar mistakes, but I just wanted to say that this story was awesome and it’s among my favourite short stories Keep writing 🙂

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Poisoned Apple Part 2

    Hi! I don’t want to tell any grammar mistakes, but I just wanted to say that this story was awesome and it’s among my favourite short stories Keep writing 🙂

    Sep 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Kidnapping at Hoffman Lane

    Hi, the others have pretty much told all the grammar mistakes, but I found another “Her and Vicky had been for years,” it should be “ she and Vicky had ...

    Sep 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Kidnapping at Hoffman Lane

    Hi, the others have pretty much told all the grammar mistakes, but I found another “Her and Vicky had been for years,” it should be “ she and Vicky had ...

    Sep 2, 2020


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— Kaia