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Wow this is like the most in depth review ever! I feel that I can rebuild the story from the ground up! Thanks!

Why thank ya kindly! Those definitely seem to be the biggest issues with the story, as you've told them in detail and others think the same too. This was very ...

Thank you so much! My english teacher thought the same thing about Rheta too, and wanted her to be real. Now that I have multiple people who back that up, ...

Oh goodness, I thought for sure the ratings "13 up, 18 up" system would be better on this site, like they have an option for "insensitive" writing or something. Yet ...

YES THANK YOU! i knew the ending was crap but it was all I could come up with at the time. It was supposed to show how it was Jos ...

Wow!!!! Thanks so much I really appreciate this! It will definitely help me improve it!!

EEEH GADS! I'm aware of the inadequate flow, I wrote this at eleven o' clock at night for a creative writing assignment. I will work on the flow soon but ...

Gah! I just want to say that I'm aware that the flow isn't as good as it could be. I wrote this during health class and was surprised by the ...

Oh my goodness...I found one, I finally found one! A beautiful story worth all of the recognition it deserves! Finally, a story that i didn't have to skim through while ...

oh wow i really appreciate this!!! thank you so much I've been trying to get a review of this for a while so again thank you! and yes I'll try ...