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Re: Neighbors
I really like it! It's quirky in a non-quirky kind of way. It's seems to me more like a small chapter in a book rather than one short story. I'm ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: metropolis
I really enjoyed this poem. But i must agree with the two earlier posts. May be because the first 4 lines are so thick and the final 4 are so ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: To My Departed Lover
Hm, it sounds somewhat confusing but at the same time it sounds like it makes allot of sense. Like the two people have broken up and the writer knows they ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Last Breath Reminiscence
I am really intrigued by this poem, it's very apocalyptic (to me). And how each line starts with a different action, laugh, giggle, all that jazz. But it does seem ...
Nov 9, 2009
