recreating

Pardon?

Thank you. I'm so sorry that you had to go through this. It happened a few years ago, and then, i never would've been able to write about it.

Also, she's trying to make her suffer for leaving her.

So, where should i break off the paragraphs then? Also, the capitalization is a stylistic choice.

Thank you! The I's were a stylistic choice. The ones that were capitalized were at the beginning of sentences. Also, the character just wanted an escape. When she ran in ...

Thank you. To improve it, however, i need to know exactly what was confusing. Sorry, i don't mean to sound annoying, but i wrote this so of course it isn't ...

It isn't a memory. For both Kira and her mother, i tried to portray insanity. Anna isn't there, Kira just thinks that she is.

The way that the words flow just has a certain beauty to it. I very much enjoyed the style. You're use of sensory language was wonderful. It was a great ...

Please don't leave any more comments on my work. No offense, but this doesn't help me. If you were trying to earn points or whatever, you should actually earn them. ...

I'm fine. I've never felt these feelings, i'm glad that you were concerned, only in the way that i know that i did what i meant to. I didn't want ...

Honestly, i think that if you continue a little bit more it wouldn't hurt. It's just so interesting, so i think that people would read more. Also, since this is ...

Yes, i know. In that case, i would label it as a prologue. It's fantastic!

This is great. It's very well written. The emotion is very prominent. I just have one question. What is your inspiration? If you do not wish to speak, i understand.

This is lovely. I really loved when you said, "You, my dear Are not a masterpiece But a collection of many." I just love how it doesn't represent the being ...

I love your rhyming. This is very relatable.