recreating

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm just a little bit torn, though. I understand where you're coming from, but sometimes if poems are too specific it makes them less ...

Thanks. I'll rewrite it later.

Thanks for commenting! I personally don't like to give an entire life story in the first chapter, so that way later on there is still a lot to learn about ...

Thank you for your comment! I'll make sure to work on all of those things!

I agree that I should have answers, but they don't all need to be in the first chapter.

I can see what you're saying, but questions aren't always a bad thing. I personally prefer to write in the moment and give more background later. I don't like beginning ...

The repetition was intensional. Also, what do you think that I need to reword? Just saying that I need to reword somethings doesn't really help me to make changes.

The more followers the better! Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment. Maybe we should start a club. I think that since some of non-writers(I still think that ...

Yes, I figured. She's off to a wonderful start.

Thank you! Honestly, i feel that with stylistic choices that what really matters is constancy. My capitalization, while incorrect, was consistent.

Oh, okay. I'm sorry. Well, if you have access to another device then try to add paragraphs.

"Close Together." Sorry, i hate to start off with such a tiny nitpick, but that really got on my nerves. I don't think that the T should be capitalized. It ...

Thank you so much! Since poetry doesn't really follow the same grammatical rules, punctuation has been difficult for me. I'd love to review your works!

Thank you so much!

I did use a bit of slant rhyming to avoid everything feeling forced. Thank you so much for commenting! Where do you think that i should put punctuation? Sorry, i ...