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You're welcome, mate. I'm glad that I could help. Good luck and all that jazz.

Thanks, mate. Pretty sure this is a one-shot deal though. I've edited out the references to Jay. Although I'm curious, what parts did you find awkward to read in particular? ...

I wish the story was: and everyone drank sweet drink which made them take a silly trip, but sadly this story (as I told you in PMs) is more a ...

I definitely see the Jay problem, there. Haha, this teaches me to never post a first draft again. I'll edit those out. Now, onto the wooden wall comment -my English ...

Thanks, Furry Dragon. I appreciate it. Don't think this will dissuade me from posting in Feminism~

Of course that would be amongst one of your favorite parts. :P You made me put it back into the poem during the revising stage. Ah, I can see that ...

Thank you, mate. I appreciate your comments. I did the indentation without much thought. Looked nice, lulz.

Here it is simplified: the relationship between the girl and I, our dynamic together, and my feelings towards Hawai'i acts as a parallel for the girl and I (I love ...

Thanks. I appreciate the review. I met Lily in Hawai'i. It felt right.

You bet! Right after I finish reviewing, I'll post the next chapter -in a month's time. With any luck, I'll be able to give you the painting and the next ...

I do not believe any piece had any sentence fragments %u2013technically speaking. As per the fluidity of the phrases, a valid point you bring up was something I carefully crafted ...

I didn't plan to write a novel or story out of this. The %u201CUnconventional Boy%u201D series was meant to be short clips of his narrative: how Clove met Kay, Clove%u2019s ...

Thanks for the review, mate! I appreciate the effort and time you put forth. I'm glad you could appreciate the humor of the set circumstances. Now elaborating on the points ...

You're welcome, mate. You brought up plenty of points.

You're welcome. Also, you tease! Here I thought the bloke up and died on us. Huh, nice move. I do hope we find out what he looks like -and how ...