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I’m intrigued by this love story. Michael claims to regret leaving Lena the first time: however, he had children with his wife. It appears to me that he moved on, ...

I believe this story can have a real punch to it, but it's held back by the fact there's too many emotions and not enough facts to validate those emotions. ...

Well, I've got to agree with previous reviewers that it was a splendid twist towards the end. I even appreciated catching on to a bit of foreshadowing with, "very human ...

I see great potential here. For example, I would've liked to see you elaborate a bit more on the "vibrant star" since it evokes a powerful image especially when you ...

I could relate, somewhat, to the tale. It has great potential: however, I felt that you held back a lot of the crucial details as GeeLyria brought up. What are ...

I appreciated how succinct the story is. It didn't overwhelm me with details: however, on the other hand I am not very familiar with Batman so there were times in ...

I can appreciate the description, enlightening me on what an episode must be like. You see, I have no experience with epilepsy and those who suffer from it. Thus, I ...

Good stuff, I dig how you began and ended with the scarlet hue on her cheeks. I appreciated the touch. It gave it this feeling that it was a cycle. ...

Nice work, you did a great job setting up the tone for this piece. Two bits that truly captivated me: "relished the hunt" and "the chill of the mid October ...

These are minor mechanical errors. A little boy,perhaps a year older then she, came up to her and keeled down in front of her. A little boy, perhaps a year ...

It's an intriguing piece. Definitely original, the idea of using emotions as a substance. Now, getting down to the gritty I wondered if it was necessary to have such a ...

Man, I've forgotten what the stars look like. It's a thought that occurred to me. Clouds galore hide them from sight: nonetheless, I digress. I enjoyed it. There was this ...

Great piece. I appreciated how the words vividly expressed what took place. As the previous review stated: the story is truly engaging and overall an excellent story. I would've to ...