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This is awesome! I was laughing basically the whole time. When I wasn't, I was smiling because I knew that I was going to laugh again soon. There's nothing I ...

I love this poem! It's short and yet so full of emotion. I especially love the first line, and the ending. This is really good! You are obviously talented at ...

This was a good story, but I kept getting distracted by the paragraphs. They're really squished together, and there are some spots where you could separate one paragraph into two ...

She didn't know that she was perfect on the outside,And no one else knew she was broken on the inside. I really like the ending lines.... this is a good ...

She didn't know that she was perfect on the outside,And no one else knew she was broken on the inside. I really like the ending lines.... this is a good ...

Whoa. Well, let me just say that I really liked this! It gave just enough information about Felicity to be mysterious, without giving the whole "I'm magical, blah blah" speech. ...

Thanks for the reviews, you guys! They really helped. It's nice for a change to have someone actually telling me what could make it better, instead of having my mom ...