raynelullaby

I certainly liked your style, it was different from what I'm used to reading. Some of the lines confuse me however. Are you going through the seasons? Because I was ...

I think you should add to it, I find it just ended a bit abruptly. Maybe clean it up a bit, by adding more detail and paying close attention to ...

I liked it! It was interesting, and I like some of the other readers found myself going back and reading it. Other than the spelling mistake that has already been ...