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  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Soul-Ridden

    Hello Ashley602338! I was in the mood for a good Drama/Romance, and thought I'd check our you short story. Let's get started with the review, shall we? :D He squeezes ...

    Jan 24, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Something With Penny Lane

    Hello Flumadiddle! I'm not familiar with Lumi's contest nor am I able to read the link you posted for "Something More, Something Unique". I did get a delightful "I'm afarid ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 3 of Princess of the Sea

    Hello again! Here to review the next installment of Princess of the Sea. Let's get started, shall we? ... seahorses the size of our horses through the streets of the ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 2 of Princess of the Sea

    Hello again, lelu! Unfortunately, December 2017 Review Day has concluded. However, I'm back to review more, as promised. After all, two of your chapters are still in the Green Room. ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1 of Princess of the Sea

    Hello lelu! I noticed you have a few of the later chapters sitting in the Green Room. In order to comment on the plot and characters, I figured I'd check ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Tonight Show with Arthur McKenna

    Hello fellow Writing Wookie! Hopefully I can get to this in time before another Google Bot's Minion shows up. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story nonetheless. Let's begin the review, ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter 1 Return

    Hello, fellow YWSer! I noticed the fourth installation of this story has currently been sitting in the Green Room since November. I'd thought I'd try to help you get it ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 4.1

    Oh man. Finally made it back to this. xD Alright, let's see where you take this next. That was why he would always target the underlings , - the lowest ...

    Aug 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Monster of Me: Chapter 2

    Hello again! Since this is also in the green room, thought I'd take a look at this one as well. But the days came and went like gusts of wind ...

    Aug 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Monster of Me: Chapter 1

    Hello, saw both of your chapters in the green room and thought I'd help get them out. Plus, I was in the mood to read something from this genre. Let's ...

    Aug 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 3

    Hello! I see someone else beat me to get this out of the green room while I was gone. xD Well, I was here anyway, so I thought I'd check ...

    Aug 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Library Hiding Tiyael ~part 1~

    Hello! Saw this quick little chapter and thought I'd try and help you get it out of the green room. Let's get started with the review, shall we? :D So, ...

    Aug 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 3

    Woot, thanks again for the tag. Don't know if I'll be able to reply this quickly in the future. Like said, you caught me at an opportune moment. xD The ...

    Aug 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 2

    Alrighty! I'm officially caught up and should have a better idea how to review this chapter in terms of the story presented thus far. Let's get you down to one ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1

    Hello again! I'm here to enjoy this next chapter before attempting to help get your third (well, technically second) one out of the green room. Here we go! :D Meg ...

    Jul 29, 2017


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy