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Re: Whole
This poem was great. I could really feel the emotion involved in it. I could also relate to it, in a way. There are two things which i BELIEVE are ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: White Lines
I really liked this poem. It flowed very well, and you had the right choice of words. I was sort of confused on if the person being portrayed fell into ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Hero Or Zero
I liked this piece, but there are a few places that need work, which was already listed. I believe this piece was meant to let all your emotions out. It ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: My Poetry's S**t!?
I really liked this...and who does care about the title??? + it makes your poem stand out from the rest. I also love the randomness, (penguins and tundras) :) Couldn't ...
Aug 30, 2008
