rainbowbubble

Thanks so much! can you point out the other mistakes? I'm trying to make it better :)

Aw thanks so much! :)

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This is really good! However, I think you should try and keep the length of each line consistent through each of the verses, besides that, great job! -rainbowbubblex

Thanks for the great advice, we also studied the Truman Show in English. I don't usually rhyme as well, but i though I'd give it whirl. :) I'll try and ...