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I'll annotate it in bold. (: Here in this street everything’s the same. Here in this street, people treat me with respect. People are afraid of me. Here in this ...

From the beginning I started to read this, I could tell you have a talent. How long have you been writing for? The only significant errors were the spelling and ...

I think what you've written so far is good, but the very beginning annoys me a little. How many books do you see where they introduce the characters before the ...