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  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thank you!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thank you and I will take into account every suggestion you made. Thanks for reviewing! ~Racket

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thanks!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thanks!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    Haha! Thanks for reviewing. I'll look into the stanza on home remedies. Thanks again!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    I'm trying to write more, but my second teen poem was a fail. Thank you for reviewing my poem!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    Thank you! Thanks for reviewing my poetry!

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Does it look better now?

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thank you for reviewing my poem! I will certainly take into account these things. Now that I see your perspective, I do see that "Hope" does look a little odd ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Flower's Inner Beauty

    Thanks! This is the first piece in my nature poetry series, so there'll be more. I have written two other pieces if you're interested. The others are made in my ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    I'm working on a new poem called " My Humbleness Rocks!" I hope you will enjoy that one. It includes a few features on how teens need to work on ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    I wil. Just now I'm working on another piece of comedy called: " My Humbleness Rocks!" I will friend you, you seem nice. I hope you will read more of ...

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    Thanks!

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    thanks

    Jun 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Acne

    I'll try, and thanks

    Jun 5, 2013


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot