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Re: REVISED CHAPTER ONE
First off I want to say that I was very impressed by this piece. The quality of detail and the depth with which you went into the protagonist mind made ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Together
This was very good but I just have one suggestion, i would be careful with your tenses because in the first paragraph you switched between past and present tense. However, ...
Oct 1, 2010
