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Thank you for your review! The end of the poem was supposed to reflect on how you can lose yourself trying to think too deeply; sometimes I'd rather hide myself ...

Thanks for your review! I really appreciate your opinion about the hook, because what I see in my head is probably a lot more interesting than what gets translated onto ...

Thanks for your input! I already rewrote this chapter a couple of times and I guess the description was lost in the process ;) I'm really glad the politics are ...

Thanks for your input! I already rewrote this chapter a couple of times and I guess the description was lost in the process ;) I'm really glad the politics are ...

Thank you! I'm definitely trying to get a more solid grip on the lore of the island, but I'll make sure to go a little more in-depth for the next ...

Thank you so much for your review!! And wow, I really love your interpretation, especially of the last stanza! I thought this piece was a little under-developed, but clearly you ...

That makes sense! I suppose I just can't wait until it finally shows up ;)

Np! Poems with meter/syllable counts are generally really hard to write, but the more you read them the more you'll get used to the meter and it will be easier ...

I understand what you're saying, but in some cases I'm trying to give a word new meaning by using it the way I do. Is there anything in specific that ...

No problem! I just thought of another example your poems reminded me of, "Ozymandias" by Percy Bysshe Shelley. In my opinion, the line between prose and poetry seems blurred in ...

If you want to make the lines single spaced you can hold down shift enter when making a new line. A lot of poets also use "~" to break up ...

You're welcome! "Eternal torment" makes a lot more sense now, especially relating to the metaphors in the beginning. Also I really like your interpretation of "angel and devil", and now ...

Thanks so much for your review! It was really hard for me to fit the "Adeline" part in the beginning, and now I can see it's not clear. Instead of ...

Thanks for the review! I'll look back at the part with Mama Harley, but I am trying to keep what Stephanie is doing kind of mysterious, and hopefully it will ...

Thanks for the review! I figured I might have introduced a few to many characters, but for now the only important ones are Sirrah Bear and Stephanie. I didn't think ...