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Hi CaptainJack! I’m just dropping by for a quick review. The build-up of suspense towards the end was great, and I definitely wasn’t expecting that plot twist. The scene in ...

woah. This is a really good piece. I loved your use of metaphors and the fluidity of the piece, it’s very well done. Especially when you first introduce the Mateo ...

Hi there! I think you have a really great idea for a superhero story, and I love how the villain's power is being precise. It's a really cool idea, and ...

Hi Beautiful Sparkle! I loved your story and your interpretation of Snape as a child. You do really well at setting up scenes, and your characterization is phenomenal throughout! Although ...

Hi Liberty! This is such a wonderful poem, and the imagery throughout is beautiful! I can’t find a favorite line because the whole poem IS my favorite line ;D One ...

Hi Katteex! I am absolutely enthralled by the way you metaphorize words throughout history! The poem is really well thought-out, and the way you formatted it blew my mind. That ...

Hi Em16! I’m here to review you, so let’s get started! First off, I love how you kept changing the name of the person you’re writing to. It really gives ...

What a twist ending! Your description of anxiety as a short story is really creative, and I loved how suspenseful you made the story. I’ve just got a few small ...

Hi there! I’m just going to give you a short review, because this is already a great piece. I love your subject, and I feel like broccoli is one of ...

Wow! This is really amazing! I’ve tried my hand at villanelles before, but they never end up quite right. I love your last stanza, and I feel like it really ...

Hi there! I really don’t have a lot to say about this story, mostly because it says it all for itself. The first read-through was a little confusing because of ...

Wow! This is a really great poem, and there’s so much to love about it! One thing that really stuck out to me was the two lines at the end ...

Hi there! I think your story is really well-written, and I love the focus on "knowing" and "not knowing". I also love the way your characters talk to each other, ...