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Re: Open up yourself
Hi I love the message of this! It is so true and very important!! We can't be scared forever and must tell our stories to others in order to be ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: 5 Haiku
WOOOOWWWW!!! You make haiku writing seem so easy. Your poems are flawless as far as I can see and really paint an image even in those short three lines! I ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Convictions
First of all, I can relate to this poem 100%!!! I'm actually not Christian (I'm Jewish) but the idea works for any religion. It's funny because I always look up ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Afraid of the dark
Overall, AMAZING PLOT!!!! I like the way it was written and when you introduced new details and characters. However........ there is a A LOT of grammatical errors. I'll try to ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Loss of Self
Overall, love it!!!! There are just a few lines below that I think would do well with the corrections. All the broken are all that remains... Maybe you can change ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: She's Taking the Wheel
Great lesson to come out of this essay. I love how you open up with a dialogue. That immediately grabs the reader's attention and makes them want to read more. ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
Wow this is intense. At first I didn't think the poem was about suicide but now that I finished reading I think it is. That's the impression you were trying ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: I Will Miss The Crows
Wow, you have a great sense of imagery. The little things you choose to explain, like the sound of the cicadas, leaves a lot of flavor for the reader and ...
Jul 28, 2011