purplepen

Wow. That was really long! I thought it was very interesting, though. I liked how you kind of kept it mysterious. It was a good way to keep the reader ...

Hmmmm.... mysterious. Very mysterious. Haha! Anyway, I liked it. It was very attention grabbing! The sun always shone straight down on the town, so the sidewalk was so hot, it ...

Hi! Let me just start off by telling you that this was amazing! I was almost crying by the time I got to the end! It was very well written ...

Hi there! :) So, to answer your first question, no. I think this was just the right length. To answer your second, yes. While I was reading, I got the ...

Hiya! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Congrats on you first post! Let me just say that I am honored to be the first person to comment on your first post! ...

Hi there! Sorry no one has taken the time to review your work yet. Lets fix that now, shall we? First of all, I totally agree with you on this! ...

I thought that overall, it was a nice speach. Exspecially the last couple of paraghraphs. I felt really motivated. And, I completelly agree with you. You had some very good ...

Wow. No offesne, but this was pretty bad. You really need to work on your grammer. It was terrible. First of all, you need to spell out the words correctly. ...

Hey, that was really good! I liked how it was bitter-sweet and not really sappy like alot of other romance stuff. It was very well written, and I appreciate that. ...