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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cutlery Can Do More.

    hey! i really liked this and i loooved the title. buuuuttt, i think maybe you can write poems without giving a sentence to each line and maybe break them up? ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Beat Road

    Thank you, Modernist. I like you. (:

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: haiku for the shipwrecked

    hey it's really good i really liked it :) i didn't really get the second part though, all i see are lines. but good job on the rest. keep on ...

    Jul 28, 2010


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