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Re: Cutlery Can Do More.
hey! i really liked this and i loooved the title. buuuuttt, i think maybe you can write poems without giving a sentence to each line and maybe break them up? ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: The Beat Road
Thank you, Modernist. I like you. (:
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: haiku for the shipwrecked
hey it's really good i really liked it :) i didn't really get the second part though, all i see are lines. but good job on the rest. keep on ...
Jul 28, 2010
