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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Goodbye, my friend (Adiós, mi amigo)

    Hey there! I know this has been already reviewed and commented but once I read it, I felt the need to tell you that I love it, the Spanish version ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hunted

    Hey Sand! I'll review your work today. First of all, congratulation for the prize this piece really deserved it. I liked it a lot, it is well written and you ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the light i saved from the dark

    Hey James! I'll review your work today! So this was nice, the story is nice, I liked a it a lot. But there is still room for improvement here so ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Scars: Part 1

    Hey Tommy! Well first of all, I have to say that this is really a nice story, especially because you can relate to it. It doesn't matter if you are ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bearable

    Hey Kat!! I'll review your piece, I'm a little rusty so please excuse me if I say something quite out of place. So first of all, I really liked your ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: New Roommate

    hey there!! I'll review your work today, I'm a little rusty so please excuse me. =) So the idea is very interesting, and you are right, meeting your new roommate ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry

    This was brilliant, that's all I can say about it, it was brilliant and the wording was so beautiful. I agree with you, I grew up with the Harry Potter ...

    Jul 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Atlantic Prep

    Hey Hockeyfan!! Well, to be honest this was good, you have an interesting idea going on here, but it didn't really catch my attention. It's a really small piece and ...

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Family Problems

    Hey Retro!! Well first of all I want to tell you that this was really good, I really liked it. It was quite cruel but really good. I liked how ...

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)

    Hey Razzker!! Well, this was a good read, I liked it, the whole vampire thing was really good (I'm quite biased because I'm a vampire fan). I found your story ...

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: So Many Memories.... Aren't There?

    Hey bcain! This is a really good story, I liked it, it was romantic and it was sad. Towards the end, I swear my heart was already broker by the ...

    Aug 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mastermind

    Hey Hiadel! Well I think it was a good read, I feel this as an outline like a skeleton of what could be a really good story. I liked it ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: School at Sea Chapter One Part One

    Hey Hockeyfan!! so let's get to the review. This is a really interesting idea, funny even because it's really adventurous and new. But I think it was poorly developed and ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Car in the House

    Hey Persephonia!! This story is really good, short but good, not giving away too much and showing us instead of telling us. I think the dialogue was just the right ...

    Aug 3, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Unity Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey Bickazer!! So first of all I have to say I liked this, it was really good. You asked if it was too Harry Potter-ish, well, the last reviewers have ...

    Aug 2, 2010


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