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I think SmylinG took care of all of the spelling and grammar mistakes that I saw, so on to my evaluation of the content. I really enjoyed it. It's interesting, ...

The only real problem I see is the line "Or maybe it's town". As the others above me have said, I think you meant to say 'the town' or 'this ...

The organization seems a little choppy, but it works. The content is amazing. Overall I really like it. Like the comment above me indicates, I would avoid the use of ...

I don't see anything that needs to be improved or corrected, so on to the good stuff. I absolutely love this! I had to restrain myself from laughing since I'm ...

Seeing as everything I found out of place has been pointed out I'll skip right to the good stuff. I really enjoyed your poem. I definitely can relate, I can ...

Seeing as I can't think of criticism of any kind for this I'll skip right to the good stuff. I really love this poem. I rarely read long poems online ...

Titles are always difficult for me, so I don't think I can be of much help with that. As for any improvements needed, TheAlphaBunny covered everything I saw. So, my ...

I rarely see really good acrostic poetry, but you seem to have a knack for it. I really enjoyed reading this. Since I can't think of anything that needs to ...

This is cute, well-written, and made me smile. I like the ending. :D I never thought I would like a poem written about Spongebob, but you proved me wrong. -Liz

I like it. If I could offer any advice at all it would be to expand on what you already have. I think you could make something really great out ...

I'm normally not much for love songs, but I really like it. It has a great flow to it. I definitely would love to hear the music you put to ...

I like it, I needed a laugh. I'm stuck in Geometry and something has got to keep me awake. Definitely something I never would have thought of. I guess I'm ...