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Re: Nothing Else, Save Revenge
hi isaac, i'm Psudiname and i'll be reviewing you today. in my opinion, a story is perfect when it has four things: charecter development, plot, description, and pizazz (or however ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: 2010, but not as we know it. ~Prologue
hi I'm Psudiname and I will be reviewing your work today. all in all I thought it was pretty good and I think you should definately continue. my favorite things ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)
wow, great story. it had a nice flow to it, and the dialogue felt relaxed and real. i felt you did a good job on developing your charecters, and really ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: The Darkness Thickens (excerpt)
this is pretty good, and very descriptive, with great vocabulary that is just above average but not too difficult to decipher. maybe you were a little too descriptive, but hey, ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Mystery Man
hello, I am Psudiname and I will be reviewing your work today. you will be pleased to know that I have no negative comments, and would simply like to complement ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Part 1 of the story behind Spiritglass City
all in all an interesting story. i would advise you to continue writing, because #1 i'd like to read more, and #2 the more you get out on paper, the ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: The Button (12+ for war/violence themes)
i dont know if you've ever read "the hunger games" but your charecter reminds me of an older more experienced version of Katniss. the way she has the fate of ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Fire
wow, this story is intense. i highly advise you to look up the song requiem for a dream on youtube, and listen to it while reading this story. anyway, you ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: deleted
pretty good story, especially charecter development. that will certainly come in handy if the main charecter's life is ever threatened, because if you develop his charecter enough, the readers might ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Tricked Chapter 2
so you're going to have to explain something to me, because now i'm curious. 1) isn't ara like superhuman or somthing? i mean i know it was only just once, ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Tricked Chapter 1
ok, I have to ask, is the whole 'nero' thing allagorical? just wondering, because it's not often you name a charecter after the mass murderer of hundreds of christians... anyway, ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: The Shapeshifter- Chapter 1
great story, you should definatly continue writing, as i would be glad to read more of this as you write it. anyway, i know what the other people said, but ...
Oct 5, 2010