psudiname

I must say I enjoyed reading this. the charecters were three dimentional, the action was exciting, the romance was touching, and the sudden change of narrator was pretty cool. frankly ...

this was very good, and it left me excited for the next chapter. there are a few things I would like you to make a little more clear though. first, ...

this was very good, and I'm interested to see where you go with this. I noticed you put up a first chapter, so I'll be reviewing that as well. I ...

this was a great story, with only a few minor flaws. the only two things about it I would change would be the typos, and the clarity. I think you ...

hey Socks, it's me again. I must say, the prologue piqued my attention, but this chapter has me hooked. I thought this was very good, and very little improvement is ...

I'm liking this, and I'm interessed to see where it goes, because in all honesty it has a very interesting plot. so far we havn't seen the conflict, so it ...

so first let me say that in the same way I imbued my main charecter with my personality back in my earlier story, so is nathan an incarnation of you. ...

so this is a rare occurence, but I have no negative comments. your writing is incredible, and all I can say is that I look forward to reading the next ...

She kicked as hard as she could in the opposite direction, dragging Guinevere with her. Her lungs felt like balloons about to burst. Their heads broke the surface at the ...

yep, it's one of these reviews. if you want to hear a summary of the whole thing, skip to the end and read the last paragraph. if you want to ...

so i'm really liking this, and i'll be interested to see where it goes. i liked the premise, and I think it's pretty original and I think there's a lot ...

the plot so far seems bland and ordinary, so i think it would be best to add something that really gets peoples attention, and makes them interested in what's going ...

hey, it's me again, and you'll be happy to know i really enjoyed reading this. to begin, I like the way you set the mood of hopelessness and opression. it ...

you struck a nice balence between suspense and charecter development, and did a good job of hooking the reader in. i liked the theme, but i'm certainly biased because i've ...

first let me say that i REALLY loved this story. oddly, it always had my attention. as i was reading, it was as if i was there, watching the story ...