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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: when we're young

    To add some words to words: there's a breathlessness and sense of pause to this that's striking, something that happens with the way you've chosen to split lines and create ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: the anatomy of fear

    hey Apricity, a review if it helps If I were to try and pin things down, I'd probably start with the things you do here that leap out, the way ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Budding Leaves on a Dead Oak Tree

    For one, I'd say: believe in what you're capable of, because this certainly isn't riddled with errors. Instead, it's a pulsating, rhythmic and emotionally-resonant poem that captures so much in ...

    May 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: infusion

    At times, these lines lead me towards the spare and heart-wrenching emotion that you find in W.S. Merwin; at other times, there's a hint of the chaotic ambiguity and mischief ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: sensory assault

    "And either way, we found solace in the limestone walls and rough concrete ground, we found joy in the pure act of exploration for no other purpose than to discover." ...

    Dec 18, 2016


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