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Re: A Titleless Story (3)
well your story in one lost the good usage of characters and you were in a hurry. Quietly Rosaline put her pen down on the dressing table and folded up ...
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Re: Raze the Roof
hi, i'm praise and i love the re-edited version of your work. Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:46 am Post subject: Raze the Roof ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Re: Leaving Mum
i think it is a short and intresting poem It's time for me to crash, boom, fall. Into your open arms, that don't seem So open anymore. It's time for ...
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Re: A gift from hell
i think i love this poem and it's nice use of good phrases. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Katrina you have done your duty, satan has erected your cal
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Re: Moonlight Romance
hello i found your work and just wanted to say hi, you're welcome to YWS it is a wonderful world online where you can create, write and blog. your story ...
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Re: Adonis
hello monarch, i will like to say that that was a good one coming from you as a new member. your poem was quite intresting, and impressive. i love your ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: An Ode To Insanity
i will like to say it is quite a nice poem. ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Re: All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]
hi, i am praise. i love you work and the intresting way you presented it. although there are many grammatical errors in them i will like to say it was ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: A memory
hi, this is a very intresting and fantastic piece of literary writing and i can't help but say it is wonderful. i am particularly intrested in the way you wrote ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {two}
i like your story. i will like you to keep me informed on when the next part is to be released, fascinating and well-written. "the truth can set you free ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: How We're Spending Friday Night...
hi, listeningforthemuse, ummmmmmm i quite think that was a good one. as you said i won't judge too harshy. you wrote the poem by 2:oo that was quite fine. i ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Sweat and Ice - Chap. 1
hi, KJ i quite love this work of yours. i am praisejoe, a nigerian. your work was very intresting i must remark and also captivating. i don't also have to ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: God's Princess
i will like to say i love yopur poem so much, the simplicity of the poem and it's impressive arrangements are so remarkable. also the use of various words and ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Another Chance short story
dear aurora i quite love this work of yours keep it up good characters amazing stunts and generally a nice story thanks. you can email me cheers
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: The Last Word
your poem is a great one. it was so fascinatig and intresting reading the poem thanks to your knowledge and good application of literary techniques. they made your poem an ...
Sep 3, 2008
