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Re: Power of the Leaf
I loved this. It was written so well. The images it creates were amazing. It's short, but powerful. And your grammar is awesome! :) You're so good with detail. I ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:57 am -
Re: Burning
It was so short! I liked it a lot, but I wish you had gone into more detail of why the character was blushing/burning. It would have been interesting to ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:52 am -
Re: For Daddy
This is the second story I have read of yours, and I must say, I love your writing. There was quite a few grammar/spelling errors, but they could be easily ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:49 am -
Re: Scream little girl
This was...crazy. It was written very well, and the description was amazing. It made me shiver. I could get a clear picture in my head of what was happening, and ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:45 am -
Re: Mindless fluff.
You did really well. I didn't spot too many mistakes. The title says it all-it's got a lot of fluff. I love the description. I could really picture it in ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:35 am -
Re: Her Eyes
I really like what you're talking about. I think most people can relate to what you are talking about. We always have someone that we have feelings for, but they ...
Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:27 am
