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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Power of the Leaf

    I loved this. It was written so well. The images it creates were amazing. It's short, but powerful. And your grammar is awesome! :) You're so good with detail. I ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Burning

    It was so short! I liked it a lot, but I wish you had gone into more detail of why the character was blushing/burning. It would have been interesting to ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: For Daddy

    This is the second story I have read of yours, and I must say, I love your writing. There was quite a few grammar/spelling errors, but they could be easily ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Scream little girl

    This was...crazy. It was written very well, and the description was amazing. It made me shiver. I could get a clear picture in my head of what was happening, and ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mindless fluff.

    You did really well. I didn't spot too many mistakes. The title says it all-it's got a lot of fluff. I love the description. I could really picture it in ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Her Eyes

    I really like what you're talking about. I think most people can relate to what you are talking about. We always have someone that we have feelings for, but they ...

    Nov 21, 2011


It is better to take what does not belong to you than to let it lie around neglected.
— Mark Twain