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Re: kiss, hug, cry
This one just didn't cut it for me. It felt rushed and as if there was not that much effort into it. I love the idea though and I think ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Thank you Mum
I am sorry if this is true. You sound like a lovely person and for this to happen to you must be terrible. I found it very shocking reading this ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Miracle, (just make one)
I looked at the title and groaned a bit. It sounded a bit cheesy to me, but then when I read the lyrics I was literally blown away by your ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Now To Let Go.
I liked the idea of the poem, as I thought I can relate to it but your in danger of hiding the meaning of the poem under too much symbolism. ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: "EDITED" It kills me to know
Hi, I'm new here. This is the first poem I saw. I related to this so much, you really spoke to the reader and your audience and you should be ...
Oct 11, 2010
