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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Forgotten Things Wash Up Here (Gorillaz Plastic Beach)

    Wow! Nice story! You really captivated me in the beginning paragraph! I'm going to highlight some points I think you can improve on: 1.I need something else to wear. My ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Ok, so overall this price sounded like a first chapter instead of a prologue. I also felt like it went very fast and I couldn't follow it very well. You ...

    Jan 5, 2014


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