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Re: The Day he Hung Up
Hey Isha, good story. Corny, yes. But it works. The only thing that stood out to me was the fact that you wrapped up the end pretty quickly. It seemed ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: In the end
Merlin34-- Musical? I didn't think of that. About Facebook, I wanted this to seem in our present time, during all these internet hypes. shubhiloves2write-- I was going to post this ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: 5 Days
hey misamiera, i really liked this. i liked your word choice and how you used just a couple of sentences to pull the reader in and make us feel what ...
Feb 18, 2010
