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Re: My first "her."
With this girl around I'm glad I'm a guy. It was well constructed and pretty much to the point. What else is there to say. Good job
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: What is an American
Actually the girl is an American and also a murderer.
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Day at the store
ashleylee, Thank you for the feedback. The story should have gone into the non fiction category and I should have re read it a few more times. The paragraph thing ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: What Kind Of Fool Am I?
I like how it is vague. it leaves more to the imagination. if it was a longer story then i would want more clarity but for the size it is ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: The Name Is Carmen.
I liked it alot! very put together and orderly. I remember my teacher making us do these in grade school mine really sucked compared to yours.
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: There's A Heroin Addict On Our Street
This was really a great story. I have always liked storys people post like beats all the cliched roamantic storys haha.
Oct 2, 2008