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What can I say? This is awesome

I gave my teacher a copy and never heard anything about it. I never really liked her anyways. and I see what you mean sitkasjunk, Ill fix it.

Did I ever Say thanks for all the reviews I got on this? I appreciate it everyone. You helped me get first place!! it was like a year ago though....

Thanks you two.

Wow Bickazer, you do amazing work. Thank you for such an in depth review.

Mr. Anthony brings up the question and I would say: personal liberty > anything else

Review some works before you post more. The accepted ratio is 2 reviews to 1 post

Ok you wrote a little more but what about the paragraphs? Every time a new person starts talking there should be a new paragraph. Also after the last quotation mark ...

Yes the monsters in the book are vampires but it doesn't take away from the story at all. And they are not like all draculaish.

The book is great though depressing. The version I read also had some other short stories by the same author (cant remember his name and i loaned the book to ...

Review this please!

Thanks for the review chichi I went through and changed a few things to protect the innocent. The ending with the beginning thing was a spur of the moment thing ...

Thanks you guys I am going to try to re word this whole thing to not make it so... um.. factual? I guess and when I type the rest up ...

I updated the story and fixed a few errors I found. Please tell me what you think!

I can tell this is from a great writer because when I read the prompt i thought, "this is going to suck". But it didn't at all. It was a ...