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To tell the truth I think it is very cliche.The vocabular and imaginitive is horrible, and frankly the idea sounds a bit used. But, your writing does have promise and ...

Okay, so maybe I'm not the harshest critic, but all I can say is WOW! That really was amazing! It sort of draws you into another world. I can almost ...

I enjoyed every second! You described the sword fight amazingly. I tend to have trouble phrasing one-on-one battles, but you make it look easy. There were a few places where ...

I see someone has already pointed out your grammatical errors so I won't worry with that. I absolutely loved the story! It was sooo sweet! When I saw the title ...

I absolutely loved it!!!! It was amazing. It saddens me that one day sci-fi-ish books like this may become reality. Global warming is something I am passionate about, and I ...

I am a fan of Greek Mythology myself. I found the way you told the story enchanting! It had an amazing flow to it, although I did see some mistakes ...