philoneist

Hello! Welcome to YWS! The poem is a pleasant read, making the reader wish that there are more lines. The structure of the poem can be improved. You could have ...

Hello! I would like to start by mentioning that your work is quite good. It presents a plethora of imagery for the reader and ends with something with which most ...

Reality is the essence of this poem and in its simplicity lies the beauty. The phrases, 'scrapping out scribbles', 'freeze in time', 'silly little mess splattered' accentuate the effect of ...

It's precisely put.I like the line "Hope, a false emotion man selfishly created" 'cause many people generally don't see it that way.Change is impossible in the fog of ignorance and ...