phantom_blackfire_wings

First of all, good job! I hope I can help you out! We met in September, freshmen in college, and by May she was practically dead. For some reason, this ...

Okie dokie then, I'm going to review. :D They were of different ages from the small curious playful toddler in front to the old calm bearded man seated at the ...

I don't know how good I'll be at this reveiwing poems thing but this one deserves it. A princess so lovely, her eyes shone like stars. No one would ever ...

It occurred to the three that were conscious that they probably weren't going to live through this. Jak couldn't help , but laugh and Jared swore at the whole world, ...

Nightshade- Shadow of Light Chapter 1: It Takes A Thief part 2 Rheas stepped out of the Gate and glanced around the large room. It was a simple stone room, ...

I love this immensely. It made me giggle. Though, I suddenly felt the need to challenge you. *giggles* Ah yes, years of playing sports suddenly comes into play. I get ...

Hello! Nightshade: Book 1- Shadow of Light Chapter 1- It Takes A Thief The room was small and dark, a lantern hanging by the door was the only source of ...

I love it! I especially love this line: "Tenderly and violent" Probably because I have my own guitar, I know that you can play a guitar violently but still tenderly... ...

I also say welcome. I tried to read this, i really did, but you should put more space between the paragraphs, then PM me so I can read it. Okay? ...

I liked it, but Suzanne is right. This poem is cliche. this sort of poem is done too many times, which kind of makes me sad because that means a ...

1. I liked it and would definetly read more 2. I agree with 1dering at stars; I like the vaugeness. 3. Most things start out confusing, thats why you have ...

The story itself is interesting. And I like interesting. One thing that bugged me is that I knew almost nothing of their surroundings. and the fact that I'm not even ...

all of the mistakes (and more) were already found by shanan-cat, so I won't rattle on with details that you've already read :) I really liked this, at first I ...

I really like this piece. The language, in the words of Gryphon, drew me in. It flows really well too. I agree with the POVs, but I'll forgive you :) ...

I really liked this piece. If i had the time and energy, I'd try to Crit. this better :) Seperating the different people's dialouge would make it eaisier to read. ...