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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Enigma

    The silence that had so long held the town has broken. One of the factories further in Further in where? is now nothing but a blaze of flames, with a ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In the early hours.

    Above the town, the sky is split and tugged from east to west by clouds. Tiny black holes buzz like reversed stars in the morning light. And below, the town ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Incubus

    I surrendered to the shafts of Sleep Good opening line Which bright Pain could not penetrate; Blissful numbing of the mind As curtains rose before the screen Of all that ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 8

    I should be happy. After all, I have met real city teenagers and their anger – at least one of them. In a way, I'm content because of the new ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 7

    Sorry for the long absence, but here I am, back again :) Exams over - whoohoo! Ok, no more spaming, on with the crit ;) "So lovely to see ya ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 6

    I'm afraid that I have somehow upset Satin. Her thoughts don't seem very serene It's strange choice of words considering the situation - not to mention, thoughts aren't usually serene, ...

    Jun 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Battalion

    I'm saying straight off, I don't know anyting about a bout, sorry. Can't help you with that. The Battalion One dark morning many years ago, A Battalion of soldiers stood ...

    May 26, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 5

    This is just awful. I'm all all is redundant here stunned. I don't know what to do. I promised and swore to be as mean to Cinnamon as possible. I'm ...

    May 25, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 4

    I'm smiling even though I don't want to. Satin seems simply horrified, but she's trying to be perfectly composed. I'm not surprised, though. Most people look askance at me at ...

    May 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 3

    Oooh great formatting, reads wonderfully now, thankee :D 09:37. Oh. Somethign more than "oh", a mention of her emotions and thoughts, perhaps? Mom won't be liking me waking up late ...

    May 20, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 2

    It's always this kind of romantic atmosphere in new places. It's fun to imagine being comma for example Sara from "Little Princess" who's having a feast in the attic. Of ...

    May 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bubbling, chapter 1

    "No." I tell that to Mom right away. I don't want HER to come here and mess up my summer that Replace "that with which was supposed to be the ...

    May 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Magic of the Four Elements~Chapter 3

    Chapter 2 At the end of the day, Alexandra did as she was told. She waited in front of the stables as the sun was still high in the sky ...

    May 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Magic of the Four Elements~ Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 A maid turned into the women’s corridor, heading for Lady Cassaras’ room. Her dirty-blonde hair was tied back into a braid, and she had brown eyes surrounded by ...

    May 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Magic of the Four Elements~prologue

    Prologue What’s going on, Galen? Is everything all right? asked Suoh. We never use this part of your cave unless it's an emergency. Yes, yes, everything’s fine, Galen rumbled deep ...

    May 14, 2008


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines