patience_isnt

Okay, quite a few grammar mistakes. Try to fix them before posting, because this is something you can easily do yourself. Plus, it shows that you enjoy your piece enough ...

There's a lot of grammar problems, and I'd suggest you fix them. I'll show you what I mean with the first paragraph as an example. I'll bold what I changed, ...

I think it was pretty good, but I'm kinda confused about the three years before part. I don't really get the point of it, and if I were you, I'd ...

I saw you had a piece here, and you reviewed me, so I'm reviewing you. Anyways, it was a very good piece. It drew me from the title and until ...

Interesting. Ironic how the MC hates them at first, then is waiting for another one, is begging for another one to come along. I really liked it. The reader can ...

Interesting. I didn't really get pulled into it as much as I would've liked, but it was interesting. I liked how it was all a memory as she was just ...

An interesting piece. Different from a lot of others in this forum. It takes guts to put something so different up here, and with that, I say, "Kudos to you." ...

A very strong piece. I have anger problems, and I remember thinking like that at times. This short story really got to me, and I could imagine Austin furiously scrubbing ...

An extremely powerful piece. I'm glad I don't have a weak stomach, because if I did, puke would be all over my keyboard. You'll definitely place in that contest. I'm ...

Good start! I can't wait to finish reading it! I think this story can easily pull the reader in, because everyone's had someone have a crush on them that just... ...

I thought this was just an average short story. It didn't really pull me in, and all the punctuation mistakes really didn't give me a chance of being pulled in. ...

I am very sorry to say that... I feel like this every night before I go to bed, regretting what I wrote up on Word before bed. I was laughing ...

All I can say is... Wow. That was a really good short story. I was on the verge of tears most of the story, and the rest of it I ...

Pretty good so far. I am excited to read the rest of it when you post it. I just have a few grammar and spelling mistakes that you made. If ...

I really enjoyed the first part of Part 1. I liked how I can relate with Tibby and the relationship of herself and her mother. There were just a few ...