passenger

Hey! Thank you so much for your review. This was basically what I thought of it: "I can't really tell where you're going with this." Me neither. Yup. That's it. ...

YES! 8D

>.< THANKS SO MUCH!!!! And the high and mighty thing%u2014sarcasm. xD Hey, my fault for not making it obvious. :D

Aw that's sweet. ^^ And never could my review be better than the poem! :D

Thanks! And it was actually about being stuck in traffic. But you know; getting hit by a car, sitting in the car, same thing. xD. I'll try to fix the ...

@Messenger, yeah, that's what I thought, too.

Thanks for the review! The only reason I didn't capitalize or anything was just a poet's choice...not because I have crappy grammar, haha :D Maybe I will change it though, ...

^^ Aw, thanks!

Hello again! I saw your message saying that you edited your original version! I have read the newest version and I am here to say that you have fixed all ...

Thanks so much! c,: I know the form and organization is kind of substandard; I'll edit it in time. :D

Um. Okay. Thanks for the criticism. The teeth were actually a metaphor for a piano, and as for the different sentences...I kind of meant for it to be that way. ...

Thanks for the helpful review ^_^ And I totally missed that changing style! I'll have to fix it. Onto revising :-)

Haha. Your welcome, that's okay, and me too. If that makes any sense. XD

Thanks for reviewing! As for the sentence structuring thing...the way I write is like a stream of consciousness (which is sort of annoying to the reader, I know). You're exactly ...

O.O Sorry it commented twice.