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Oooppsss, I missed your review in the chaos of Review Day. So sorry. Thank you. I'm glad you liked the chapter. The story starts out real slow, so you mostly ...

Thanks for the review. I must admit that I was having trouble writing the "Carlin" chapters with an omniscient narrator when the rest of the book will be first-person. So, ...

Uh, careful, you also take 100% of the blame.

You don't have to know you're doing it: you're The Author, you get to claim all the praise.

I aim to please :D Now, you know my weakness: Stuff Happens and I'm all sweetness.

to get it wrong, I mean...

OMG, I can't believe I wrote "children nuggets"! Thank you for spotting that one. I know it starts out slow, but I'm finally getting on with the plot, so Stuff ...

Thanks for a new review. I really love having someone to spot my mistakes. I'm a little embarrassed, but I clearly couldn't see them anymore. I hope they won't get ...

Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too. I did hesitate between SF and Fantasy on this one, but it's just a little too ...

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for correcting these mistakes. You're right, I can't see them after a while. Have a nice review day.

I'm not sure I can explain. As a kid, I didn't really wonder, it sounded normal: we've got Lent and, at the end, Easter Sunday, and they've got Ramadan and, ...

I can't imagine how it would work out. I didn't think it was awful or anything, it was just a bit jarring, maybe because you didn't do it before...

xD That's confusing. I'll definitely work some more on this chapter. Thanks.

Thanks for the review. I totally understand your point of view. I will probably re-work this chapter, and I will keep your comments in mind. I wasn't completely surprised to ...

Bretagne is a region in France (North-West). They do crepe and cider. Maghreb is a region in the North-West of Africa. When we use the word in France, we generally ...