paperforest

Hey, sorry for the late reply. Thank you so much for this eloquent review!

Hey there, thanks for the review! Sorry I took so long to reply!

haha thanks!

Hey there, sorry I took so long to reply. Thanks so much for the review! I will definitely think about what you said when editing, especially your third point. Also, ...

Sorry for my late reply - thanks for the review!

Hey there, sorry this took so long, but thanks so much for the review! You make some really good points that I'll definitely keep in mind in the future!

whoops, double post

You're very welcome!

You're very welcome! That's really great that you're expanding your poetic range, and this is a very good start! One thing that you could try that might be fun and/or ...

It's ok! I just didn't adequately prepare myself, despite your warning. :) And the more I work on rewriting this, the more I'm appreciating the amount of advice you gave, ...

Thanks for the review! I agree that it's too short, I'm currently rewriting and expanding it - I'll consider your points!

Thanks for the review, and the title suggestion (love the pun)! I'll keep your advice in mind when rewriting!

Hey, thanks for the review (and the title suggestion)! When I rewrite, I'll definitely be adding more details, and explaining the backstory better.

Hey, thanks for the review!

Thanks for the honest review! You've pointed out a lot of things for me to work on, so that will be very helpful. To be frank, this was a hard ...