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Hey, this is a neat concept, I really like what you did at the end, turning it around. Reminds me of a quote I read the other day, "I realized ...

Hmm, I like this. I like the rhythm and the simplicity of the words and the images it makes in my brain. It took me a few rereads to figure ...

This is beautiful! I love the first stanza, especially. My eyes sift through the stars in the sky like fingers scanning files in a worn-down office cabinet, This was such ...

Hey there, this is a neat poem! I like the slightly old-fashioned wording and setting, especially the first stanza, although I feel like there could be some more detail there ...

I love this! At the very start I was put off a bit by your author's note because it made me think that maybe you'd just copied google's definition into ...

Ah, this is beautiful! I especially love: Dreams are like feathers fallen, or loose hair left on combs. Dreams are like sand caught on shoes carried miles and miles from ...

Hi! You've got some nice imagery here, I really like the way the poem felt like it was from this wild land, and your rhymes are nice and natural. There ...

Hi! Love the story of this poem, and the rhythm of the lines flows really well. One thing that jarred me when reading was the fact that your first stanza ...

Hi! This is an interesting poem, I like the story's concept and the imagery of the sun and the earth, the ocean and the storm, as well as the strength ...