paperforest

Hey there! Man, that last line hit hard. I like the simplicity of the words you use, it feels like someone speaking their thoughts without embellishment, it feels vulnerable because ...

Hey manilla! This is a cool poem, I really like the title, and with it the idea that overthinking/anxiety is like a drug. (And my mind ran away with the ...

Hey there FlamingPhoenix! I've been meaning to review this for quite a while, so sorry that it took me so long. Anyways, I quite like the rhyme scheme you have ...

Hey there fortis, it's me again! And maybe the slowness at the start of the previous chapter was just a necessary breather after some fast-paced action that I haven't read ...

Hey there! I think I began to read this from the very beginning but then I got busy and kinda forgot (obviously a mistake, because this looks like it's shaping ...

Hey there! First a disclaimer: I haven't read you previous chapters, so if I point out something that's actually not a problem if you know what happens before, then just ...

Hey there! This is really neat. Lovecraftian eldritch beings, game designers, and forbidden(?) love. Very cool. It's got a nice flow, with good sentence length/construction variation and a distinct vo

Hey there! I really like this. I'm not sure what to say about it just yet, but I like it! On the subject of what this is, you could just ...

Hey there! This was a fun read, I love these kind of aesthetic/descriptive things because of the way they pick little moments to show that then create a sense of ...

Hello again! This is so lovely and bittersweet and beautiful, I'm not sure if I can write a review that will do it justice! I'll try to do my best. ...

Hi there! This is quite a nice poem, I like the variety of images you use and the rhyme and rhythm makes it a flowing, easy read. However, this feels ...

Hm. I'm not really sure how I feel about this. I'm going to second everything that fraey said about reviewing having to take into account the content, and I'll start ...

Oh my goodness, this is so great! I can't decide whether to go back and read it from the start, or just keep going so I can find out what ...

This is absolutely beautiful. The subject and the story are already both compelling, and then your beautiful writing style and the obvious love and attention paid to your hawk and ...

Hey there, this is pretty good! I was a bit confused at the start because I haven't read the previous chapters yet, but you gave enough clues at the start ...